Monday, April 15, 2019

Week 12A

Feedback from my classmates.


  • Director should be a different color to make it stand out from the names to
  • add a fether to the type masks 
  • have the phone hang up 
  • don't have the line between the record 
  • all the backgrounds work well just adjust the one with the lips there's a little line at the back 
  • adjust the timing to make the different elements appear longer. 
  • maybe have the opacity drop on the smoke from the car 
  • keep the lines constant until it hangs up 
  • Johnny Depp scene is too short 
  • play around with the stroke sizes on the fonts 
  • love the colors and the styles 
  • all the backgrounds work very well together. 

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