Week 13 Outside of Class

Week 13 B (final)

Week 13 A

Today in class was the final work day that I could have and recive feedback. The main thing that i had to do was finish making changes and adding some of the final scenes.

All of the scenes that I made were on the yellow background this time and in order to keep consistant type I had to go and change the font on the blue backgrounds to yellow 

Week 12 B

Some of the updates that I made: 

• Fire now does not have the bottom on the screen 
• Phone to record transition has been revised
• most of the items now transition off-screen as well 

Week 12A

Feedback from my classmates.

• Director should be a different color to make it stand out from the names to
• add a fether to the type masks 
• have the phone hang up 
• don't have the line between the record 
• all the backgrounds work well just adjust the one with the lips there's a little line at the back 
• adjust the timing to make the different elements appear longer. 
• maybe have the opacity drop on the smoke from the car 
• keep the lines constant until it hangs up 
• Johnny Depp scene is too short 
• play around with the stroke sizes on the fonts 
• love the colors and the styles 
• all the backgrounds work very well together. 

Week 11 Outside of class

Updates-

• adjusting closed caps on record 
• adjusting the stroke on the bottle 
• adding the fire scene 
• adjusting the phones angle 
• incorporating the other backgrounds

Problems- 

• Making the fire come up straight and then shuffle 
• changing the way the record transitions 
• adding more names 
• making the subtitles under the names 

Week 11 B

Today in class one of the most important things that we did was sit down to have a meeting about where we needed to take our project. Some of the feedback that I got was:

• Work on adjusting the timing 
• Titles are the most important to make sure they have enough time on the screen
• add more fire to give depth 
• adjust the duration of sections to make them stay on screen longer 
• changing backgrounds work well 
• look into adjusting the typography 
• change typeface on record 
• stagger some names 

After receiving this feedback it made me think about some things that I had in place for this project. I decided to go back and look to see if there was any other font that I felt was effective. 

I thought that this one worked better with the theme and also on the record. 

Week 11 A

Feedback from the class: 

• adding the flicker for longer on the phone 
• change the way the phone is comming up 
• making the motion flow beter 
• add the kerning to racehl 
• turn on the title frame 
• working with the transition of the phone to the record 
• round cap the hard edges 
• inner lines of the record can use a tone grey 

Updated  

Week 10 Outside of class

I was really working on making sure that I was able to have the car move across the screen. One of the videos that I watched was this guy using built-in presets to make the smoke effect.




After figuring out the effect I applied it to the car.

Week 10 A

Feedback:

• make varying backgrounds 
• look into how elements are going to interact. 
• make everything connect 
• have the lines maybe alternate 
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Redone animation

Week 9 Outside of class

For my test animation, I decided to make the phone scene. After working with the animation I think that it would be beneficial to make the phone more animated. I'm trying to figure out to make the lines more fun. As for now, I think that I may make a wiggle line somehow to have more of the 50's fun feel to it.